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submitted 4 months 16 days 3 hours ago by: Iola : 6 commentsRipples
Over water
Climbing to a crescendo
A pebble
Takes me apart
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Ripples
Over water
Climbing to a crescendo
A pebble
Takes me apart
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Deafening calm over the water doth prevail
The silence reaching a cresendo
All life, still, in hesitant expectancy
A pebble breaks the ice
The chorus of life breathes again
Well..for a change u did better than me. Lovely! :)
A change?! I thought that was the norm :)
Second thoughts are always best. :)
I hope you were referring to mine :)
Yup coz the need is only there. :)