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submitted 2 months 11 days ago by: sadiaTabasum : 30 commentsAslam O Alikum guys....
writing here after a long time, hope you all are fine and doing well on your sides.... infact yesterday i wrote a very gud verse and wished to share with you guys... i belive that you all will enjoy a lot...
So the Verse is :
duniya k sabhi haseen chehray mairi tasbeeh k danny hain
nazar say guzerty jaty hain, ibadat hotti jatti hay!
U can comment here also: http://sadiatabasum.spaces.live.com/blog/cns!8CA887F15258C36E!470.entry
(Every one EXCEPT Taimur77 is free to comment on this blog entry....)
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Lol its laughter ok not comment . I wrote a comment on this blog entry but later i read that message at the end of the blog that i can not comment there i won't .Lol again. Can i ask you Miss.Sadia Tabassum why didn't you allow me comment in that blog majesty.
i didnt allow you because i know you always comment some thing odd, i dnt have objects on your objections and questions ... but i have objection on your owkward type of questions and some time you wrote the comments which are really cheap.... dnt mind.... but i find you a very materialistic type person ..... :D well you said that a girl wrote this verse then plz tell me girls dnt have such feeling... its 21st century girls are walking side by side with boys in parks, raods and many more dating places.... and on work places as well :) so why dnt we write such verses....
well now you asked about haseen chehray-> boys or girls... yaar for girls i really dnt have any kind of attraction BY GOD. and for boys tou larky piyarry hotty hi kub hain, i have never ever seen some beautifull boy in my life... may b its because i didnt have seen you.... hahahahhahhahahaaaaa
I write cheap comments sometimes and i am a materialistic person?
Kindly tell me mam which of my comments were cheap and i am not a materialistic type person at all .At the age of 30 i have nothing. so how come i am materialistic if i was i would have been a very rich person.
EXPLAIN PLZ
Hey Taimur, tell me, how do you find the verse?
Ok Iola ,
i think some very husan parast (beauty worshipper) said that.She asked me not to comment on that and she knew i bet that i was gonna say some thing objectionable .LOL
Iola do you think ur face is one of them or not.
anywayz the verse was good but its strange to know that a girl said that so i have alot of questions there to ask that girl.one of them is that is she talking about faces of guys or girls.
Curiosity killed the cat! :)
@Lola
i was sure about you that you will definitly comment on verse but in my post more attractive thing for you is taimur instead of my verse..... :(
Do you seriously want me to comment on your verse? :o
nahi Dr Younas BUtt ka likha howa joke hay :o
Oh umm dunno what to say. Theak hai! :)
Wow Sadia Tabasum G ,
First of all its Iola not Lola.
Am i more attractive thing LOL i am glad to know that if i am .
Iola is that true what Miss.Sadia Tabasum is saying.
I think she is kiddin . Any way Sadia G aap nain yeh kah kar mujhe khush kar diya .
You are being silly!
eeeeeeeeeee wht happend to you yaar...... ??? it Iola, not Aishweria Roy or some other beautifull female of the world its Iola.... plz be in senses i really didnt have some idea that it can make you mad... hehehhehe (Bad Joke )
"Am i more attractive thing " i thought you are Human Being...
Sadia Tabasum G,
You said that your self to Iola that i am more attractive THING then the verse for her . So keeping your statement in mind i was replying and asking Iola that its true or not am i attractive thing for her .
OFFCOURSE I AM A HUMAN BEING.
And how can i be mad about IOLA i am totally and completly in my sense Sadia Tabasum G .I only read comments of Iola don't know her at all.
IOLA SHOW US ALL YOUR PIC AND PROVE IT TO SADIA TABASUM THAT YOY ARE BETTER THEN MISS WORLD OR ASHWARIA IF YOU ARE .LOL
Good verse.. I think a good poetess is in you..keep it up
sabir thanks for the encouragement :)
wa alaikum as salam wa rahmatullah wa barakatu.
why only >> Haseen chehray
@shakeel
look "Khoobsooratti daikhny wally ki ankh main hotti hay" so every thing can b haseen, well FRANKLY SPEAKING its a flirt type of verse so that only haseen chehry... ;)
sadia i admire ur honesty...u r not a hypocrite like most of the girls around....the verse narrowly escaped addition to my truck variety :).....err i hope u encourage my honesty as well :)
@Pinky wish you gud luk .... and i am dedicating you one verse of Ilamma Iqbal as an advise for the encouragement purpose .... :)
Muhabbat mujy unn saary k saary noojawanoun say hay
dall tty hain jou taroun pay kumand.....
just follow it and you will get more variety...
Thanks ms sadia,very kind of you.
its okei,
Dnt bother...
To tell you the truth the word ibadat hoti jati hai was used .Although i like the verse but these words like ibadat which mean worship i don't them at all. I like husan (beauty) but i don't worship it .So these two words are objectionable for me.
Why not make it ,
SARA HUSIN CHEHRAY ACHAY HOTAY HAIN
NAZAR SAY GHAZARTAY JATAY HAI ________________HOTI JATI HAI.
To tell you the truth the word ibadat hoti jati hai was used .Although i like the verse but these words like ibadat which mean worship i don't them at all. I like husan (beauty) but i don't worship it .So these two words are objectionable for me.
Why not make it ,
SARA HUSIN CHEHRAY ACHAY HOTAY HAIN
NAZAR SAY GHAZARTAY JATAY HAI ________________HOTI JATI HAI.
To tell you the truth the word ibadat hoti jati hai was used i like(HUSAN) beauty but i don't worship beauty. AND EVERYONE LIKES BEAUTY BUT NO NEED TO WORSHIP IT.
@taimur
ibadat hotti jati hay dznt mean that we are doing to bow against it, u havent listened the dialogue "Apnny kaam ko ibadat samgh k kerooo" can you expalint wht does mean by it.... ??? same case here . , .
Here, Checkmate to Taimure... :) Well done Sadia.
Halal Rozi kamana Ibadat hai.Is liay apnay kam ko ibadat samaj k karooo.
OK but here it does not mean any thing similar like that .Here its just liking of pretty faces and in that liking one is calling it worship ibadat .
NAUGHTY.
The game is not over i saved the check mate . Haha ha
taimur answer should b logical . . . rozziii rotti ki baat nahi ho rahhi.... kaam ko ibadat smgh k kero.... dznt mean that it should belong t earning only, be sincere with ur duty aur apni duty ko iabdat smgh k poora kero.....
and you know to get some fame in some filed should require sincerity as u r sincere while worship....
Ok understood "agar yaun hai too phir theek hai"
Keep looking at beautiful faces n continue ibadat Sadia G. hum bhi kuch aisay hi jazabaat rakhtay hain khubsorat chehroon k baray main magar un say sirf mahzoooz hotay hain ibadat nahin kartay un ki.
Sadia G look at my profile and my pic and beautiful face there . LOL
@ Iola
I am glad to know i am such an attractive thing for you.