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Here Beginneth

Here begins the one
Whose name was written on sand,
Who loved
Blowing winds and falling rain drops,
So far
His name is still there.

Comments

Divine! Whose?

Criticism in literature is just like appreciating a piece of art, especially the abstract art, i.e., criticism should be reader oriented. That being said, I'd leave the question 'whose' to be decided by your own self.

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Sometimes I think war is God's way of teaching us geography.

Damn! War it is then. You sure need to learn some lessons. :p