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Bikhar Rahi Hey Meri Zaat Usy Kehna....
submitted 3 months 3 days 2 hours ago by: nea : 40 commentsBikhar Rahi Hey Meri Zaat Usy Kehna,
Kabhi Milay Tau Yehi Baat Usy Kehna,
Wo Sath Tha Tau Zamana Tha Humsafr
Mera,
Magr Ab Koi Nahi Merey Sath Usy Kehna,
Usy Kehna K Bin Usky Din
Nahi Katta,
Sisik Sisik K Katti Hey Raat Usy Kehna,
Usy Pukaron K Khud
Hi Pohanch Jaon Usky Pass,
Nahi Rahey Wo Halaat Usy Kehna,
Ager Wo Phir
Bhi Na Lotey Tau Aey Mehrban Qasid,
Hamari Zeest K Halaat Usy Kehna,
Her Jeet Us k Naam Kr Raha Houn Mein,
Mein Mannta Houn Apni Haaaar Usy
Kehna.....................
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khud keh tho na....it would be unwise to involve third parties..:p
Excellent Pinky
but it is good Poem
Mashallah.........great comic comment.............I enjoyed very much..............
Tumhain kia pata yeh Dil kay moamlaat kaisay hotay hain............. Sometimes, we have
thousands of words to utter, but impossible to open our lips..............
RizSh
Tumhain kia pata yeh Dil kay moamlaat kaisay hotay hain...
mujhe andaaza hai zara zara :p :)
Aur mujhay jo pata hai...kaya kehana!!
@ PINKY
hahaha....thanks 4 d WONDERFUL idea (or advice indeed).i wud definetely go 4 it......
:)
may ALLAH bless u.agar ap na hoti tu mei kia karti..........
@ rizzy 84
actually to say 1000 words to SOMEONE z nt d problem..........his absence z d problem.........
:(...:(
Where is HE? And since how long?
I can understand the pain of someone's absence.............
Agar koi intizaar ky saleeb haath main thama kar chala jae....
Or hamain yeh maloom na ho k woh kahaan hay......
Yah usay talaash karna hamaray ikhtiar main na ho.......
To yeh ghair moojoodgy or judai waqey buhut aziat naak ho jaty hay.....
Or aisay main hum talaash kartay hain kisy QAASID ko jo hamara paigham US tak pohncha day.........
I'm feeling very sad right now. I'd the same experience some years before, when I didn't know where is HE..........
And this painful feeling is still with me. I still don't know about his whereabouts now days.
RizSh
I read this poem a long time. Amjad Islam Amjad or Faraz? Whose is it? I think it is incomplete. Do let me know Nea. Thank you.
actually you 1000 of words to but all having meaningless. so you dont need to open your lips.
hahahahah
tn tena
bye bye
You are right. There are people for whom LOVE is meaningless.
By the way, these words are meant for the guys like you...........
RizSh
NEA: main nay kaha tha aap kay behalf per...Woh kehta hai "bhar main jay nea "lagta hai usay koi nai mil gayee hai
RizSh:
dont wory about it.
just to say.
aa Qasid payama Ishaq ko na Itna Taweel kr.
Faqit un se kahna kah Ankhay tars gai.
tn tena
bye bye
RizSh
Lakin ager mil jay to
Koan mil gaey. Woh?????
Ok, fine, I'll be really glad to meet and find him once again, but perhaps, I'll not be able to tell him all that I suffered during his absence.
Also, time has changed a lot..........Puloon kay nechay say buhut sa pany guzar chuka hay. Now the circumstances are not the same.
I may not be able to own him like I wanted to....... years ago.
By the way, I've told about my very very personal life on buzzvines for the first time.
That poem really struck to my heart and I recalled all that moments whose memory has become a permanent pain for me........
RizSh
Iola: yeh amjad islam ki nahi hai...Un ki poem zara farq haI AS
US SIMAT CHALAY HO ITNA USAY KEHNA
AB KOI NAH HARF-E-TAMMANA USAY KEHNA
rizzy:
I am glad to see your courage....your approach is very practical that why to accpet a person who betrayed and refused you to accept...
jo mil gaya usay yad rukh..jo na mil saka usay bhool ja
Before
Kisi ko hum na miley aur humko tu na mila
Now.....
Tu hai harjayee to apna bhi ye taur sahi
Tu nahi aur sahi aur nahi aur sahi
By the way well written poem
Mianjee I have read this poem before, many years back. And my memory doesn't fail me at all in any way. Abhi 4 saal hain memory lurhakne main :)
yani now you are 56???? :)
That your age? Main tau aapki wali age k hisaab se bta rahi thi. :)
RizSh
yah to rakh nazar main nazar yah pher jhoka nazar.
main nay dakhe ha tare nazar main haya bahut ha.
yoon na tot k chah humy is qadr faraz.
to to haseeen b ha aur tm main wafa bahut ha.
tary dikh ka kia kahana tare tarp to lage wala he jany.
Is zalam zamnay nay phir b na choocha , Is main jafa bahut ha.
TN TENA
BYE BYE
Thnks a lot for your love and care and of all the other buzzers. I really appreciate it. Thanks a lot.
RizSh
yeh to meri age x2 bunti hai .....khuda ka khof kro...koi faida nahi chupanay say...
Arre mukkar gaye. You are not Pakistan's father? :)
meri baiti ka naam pakistan nahi hai :)
Yateem kar diya na mulk ko!
aaj 11 sep1948 to nahi hai ...yateem to usi din hoa tha
most of my friends have declared it a munhoos date (for Pakistan in particular.)..as i also began my sojourn here, on this very date...11 Sep 1986 to be exact
panicy...tum to waqai hee bohat choti buchi ho...wanju khailo ghummo..ajan tuhaday eeha jiharay hin
@ mian jee...
thanks alot 4 d favour magar jhot aisa boltay k mei believe kr skti....wo mar jaye ga magar yeh nahi kahay ga.......100% sure........
aur agar(ALLAH forbid) kabhi kaha tu i've already made him confirm of his SUSPICIOUS MURDER(DEFINETELY BY ME)
@ rizzy84
where z he?4 how long?........
wo ab b sath hai magar differences in school of thoughts had made us apart......do u ever hear KISI KO SAJDON MEIN MANGANA.....i've been experiencing it for one n a half year....magar kuch ye ZALIM SAMAJ aur kuch EGOISM ha,jo duaon ki kaboliat mein hurdles hain........
aik khof zror hai k es ego mei par k usay kho na doun.......lekin ego bhi boht azeez ha.......
rizzy plz pray 4 me k wo mujy meri conditions pe mil jaye.i m requesting u 2 pray 4 me coz mera iman ha k ALLAH TALLAH totay huay ya dukhy dil ki dua zror sunta ha........ n i really feel sorry 4 u.........n definetely pray 4 u tat u gt him soon....(apny liye duaein pori hoti nai chalo ap k liye mang k dekhtay hain)
Thnks nea.Thanks for your Duas. I really need a lot of them for everything. I also pray for you to get your dream come true.
May you get that person whom your love so much............and may he soon realize how much you love him. Ameen.
RizSh
@iola
i dnt know who wrote it....i got it through sms...
Hey thanks. I hope Mianjee reads this. :)
IOLA" what should be read by me? this "love school stataments" ya kuch aur???
nea...ager usay tumhari itni fiker hoti to chor ker hee kion jata...jo mohabbat munh per mar kay chala gaya woh kuch bhee keh sakta hai...us kay baray main ziada optimistic buno gee to ksi kee nahi ho pao gee
She got an sms from Amjad Islam Amjad Mianjee ;)
Hi Nea,
Everyone is right here. Stop thinking about him and start moving towards a better future. Also instead of praying "ke wo mujy meri conditions pe mil jaye", you should be praying ke "Allah jo karey tumharay haq mein behtar karey". I've gone through what you are right now and have succeeded but later in life again lost it. so what's the point of having this ego. It will get you nowhere.
Oh haan: lagta hai Nea babar ki relative hai...woh bhee sab ka rishta dar hai :)
@mian jee
itni sense muj mein ha k apny emotions ko kisi aisy shaks se associate nahi krti jo mery moun pe sab mar k chala jaye.....chora us ne mujay nahi,mei ne usay ha......i am n alwayz be on upperhand in dis relation.....zindagi guzarnay ka itna dhung mujay b ha mian jee.... :)
@saira0915
ALLAH TALLAH kisi ki chahat ap k dil mei rakhtay hain tu us ka bhi koi maqsad zror hota hai...aur agar koi zada acha lagay tu ye dua bhi buri nahi k ES SHAKS KO MERAY HAQ MEI BEHTREEN KAR DE....coz ALLAHTALLAH koi humari parents ya dosray insano ki tarah thori hain jin k pas limited sources hon ya jo humaray samnay apni lodz of conditions rakhain....
I pray n expect dis 4m ALLAH....
HUM KO APNI TALAB K SIWA CHAHIYE
AP JASAY HAIN WASI AAT'TA CHAHIYE
Anyways thanx 4 precious suggestions
ALLAH BLESS U